In this episode, I will talk about the importance of adding good revelations and risks to your query letter.

Not only does this add more mystery to your query, but it gives us a better look at our main character and what they stand to lose if the antagonist wins in the end.

I follow the same three questions to guide us in this portion of the query as I have in the other episodes:

• Do I leave unanswered questions?
• Does it flow like a story?
• Does it cause you to feel sympathy for the Main Character.

In this episode, I also introduce some new query letters I helped my good friend with. Elizabeth Drysdale is the author of Curse of the Forgotten and Out of Time. Curse of the Forgotten is available at the link below and Out of Time is scheduled to release next month. 

Again, I am leaving the link to my book, Query Letters Made Simple if you would like a copy.

Curse of the Forgotten:

https://www.amazon.com/Curse-Forgotten-Elizabeth-Drysdale-ebook/dp/B08LLDWDYY/ref=sr_1_2?dchild=1&keywords=Curse+of+the+Forgotten&qid=1630629212&sr=8-2

Query Letters Made Simple:

https://www.amazon.com/Query-Letters-Made-Simple-Creating/dp/1695155769/ref=sr_1_1?dchild=1&keywords=Query+Letters+made+simple&qid=1630629238&sr=8-1